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When I have a problem, I mostly talk to my mother. She can sympathize with me and give some good solutions to me. But sometimes I feel her solutions too idealized. And since she is my mother, I just say a small problem but she accept it bigger. I don’t want to make her worried. So that time, I get advices from my friends who have a similar problem. We can share our opinions with each other!
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>>correct
She can sympathize with me and give some good solutions to me.
She can sympathize with me and give some good solutions to me.
>>She can sympathize with me and give some good solutions.
But sometimes I feel her solutions too idealized.
But sometimes I feel her solutions too idealized.
>>But sometimes I feel her solutions are too idealized.
And since she is my mother, I just say a small problem but she accept it bigger.
And since she is my mother, I just say a small problem but she accept it bigger.
>>And since she is my mother, I just say simple problems to her but she takes it seriously.
I don’t want to make her worried.
I don’t want to make her worried.
>>correct
OR>>I don\'t want her to worry.
So that time, I get advices from my friends who have a similar problem.
So that time, I get advices from my friends who have a similar problem.
>>So I get advice from my friends who have a similar problem.
We can share our opinions with each other!
We can share our opinions with each other!
>>correct
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