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When we go abroad.
We usually buy something at the dutyfreeshop by online and offline.
The things which are in dutyfree shops are discounted a lot.
Philippines\'s limit of customs is too low and strict.
It is only 200dollers.
I understand the discipline about customs.
But they adop the tax before discount price.
In addition they charge the 100% penalty on over the limit price.
Most of country don\'t check the tax free.
I think philippines\'s customs system should be changed.
And airlines in korea have to inform the customs discipline of philippines.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [Name]!
Thank you for raising this. Well, the Philippines has an anti money laundering law. You may not understand this as a traveler, but this law protects everyone whether Filipinos or foreigners from transacting or attempting to transact illicit funds. You know the power of money right? Have a good day!
Aki~
When we go abroad. We usually buy something at the dutyfreeshop by online and offline.
>>> We usually buy something at the duty shop online or offline shopping when we go abroad.
The things which are in dutyfree shops are discounted a lot.
>>> The things in dutyfree shops are discounted a lot.
>>> Things in duty free shops ahve big discounts.
Philippines\'s limit of customs is too low and strict.
>>> The Philippines\' limit of customs is too low and strict.
It is only 200dollers.
>>> It\'s only 200 dollars.
I understand the discipline about customs.
>>> I understand the discipline of customs.
But they adop the tax before discount price.
>>> But they apply the tax before the discount price.
In addition they charge the 100% penalty on over the limit price.
>>> In addition, they charge a 100% penalty over the limit price.
Most of country don\'t check the tax free.
>>> Most countries don\'t check the tax free.
I think philippines\'s customs system should be changed.
>>> I think Philippines\' customs system should be changed.
And airlines in korea have to inform the customs discipline of philippines.
>>> And in Korean Airplines they have to inform the Custom policies of the Philipppines.
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