Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I heard a word ‘ambition’. Actually, I think that it is a little bit overwhelming.I often see too much ambitious people in TV program. They are always powerful and energetic. It makes me tired and overwhelmed. But everyone, including me has their own ambition and I think we need to have it. We reveal our ambition in the different point. That makes us better.To achieve something, ambition must be needed.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
It is important to make an effort to step forward in learning new things so that we can apply it our daily life.
T. Jeny
>>She was speaking so softly that I could not hear her properly.
2. They have bought a new car that is quite expensive.
2. They have bought a new car that is quite expensive.
>>They have bought a new car which is quite expensive.
3. Have you ever met the people who live next doors?
3. Have you ever met the people who live next doors?
>>correct
4. How the thieves managed to escape remained a mystery to all of us.
4. How the thieves managed to escape remained a mystery to all of us.
>>correct
5. You should have called especially when they were all waiting to hear from you.
5. You should have called especially when they were all waiting to hear from you.
>>correct
6. However she spent several years in France, she cannot speak French.
6. However she spent several years in France, she cannot speak French.
>>correct
7. Since he has spent a considerable amount of time in Germany, he speaks German fluently.
7. Since he has spent a considerable amount of time in Germany, he speaks German fluently.
>>Though she spent several years in France, she cannot speak French.
8. If otherwise unoccupied, he engaged in reading books.
8. If otherwise unoccupied, he engaged in reading books.
>>correct
OR>>When otherwise unoccupied, he engaged in reading books.
9. The house was so large that it was necessary to engage an extra maid.
9. The house was so large that it was necessary to engage an extra maid.
>>correct
10. Otherwise the emporium doesn’t carry the item, no one will.
10. Otherwise the emporium doesn’t carry the item, no one will.
>>correct
OR>>If the emporium doesn’t carry the item, no one will.
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