Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Today I'm so sorry for being talked on the phone  in noise.
I tried but didn't arrive to school before our class.
I am sorry again. 
Homework
I would like to speak Japanese
I went to Japan  with friend two year ago. 
I thought street, architecture and garden tasteful and bijou. 
I was interested in Tokyo
And I talked to some people in Japanese about famous architects
I couldn't speak Japanese fluently well but could speak confidently.
For I don't have phobia about Japanese, unlike English
When The Koreans speak English unlike other languages, We are aware of the way other people are looking at one
About pronunciation 
But when I speak Japanese, I am unware of it.
So Their conversation is enjoyable
If I go to Japan again, I would like to talk deeper to Japanese
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ji-na!
Thank you for your composition today! I understand your situation yesterday. I appreciate your effort in trying to speak louder and in trying to look for a quiet place. Anyway, I\'ve observed that many Koreans want to study Japanese aside from English. I find it pretty ironic for Koreans to learn Japanese when in fact you don\'t really have a good relationship with Japan. It\'s good to know that you are open-minded. I also believe that Japanese is a very interesting language. I know some Japanese expressions because I used to watch Japanese animation. Take care and see you in class.
T. JanE ^^
Today I\'m so sorry for being talked on the phone  in noise.
>> Today, I\'m so sorry for having a noisy background during the class.I tried but didn\'t arrive to school before our class. >> Correct
>> I tried to arrive at school before our class, but I didn\'t.I am sorry again. >> Correct HomeworkI would like to speak Japanese. >> Correct I went to Japan  with friend two year ago. >> I went to Japan with my friend two years ago.I thought street, architecture and garden tasteful and bijou. >> I thought that their streets, architecture, and garden are tasteful and bijou.I was interested in Tokyo.>> Correct And I talked to some people in Japanese about famous architects.>> Correct I couldn\'t speak Japanese fluently well but could speak confidently. >> I couldn\'t speak Japanese fluently, but I could speak confidently.For I don\'t have phobia about Japanese, unlike English>> I don\'t have phobia of Japanese, unlike English.When The Koreans speak English unlike other languages, We are aware of the way other people are looking at one About pronunciation >> When Koreans speak English, we are aware that other people look at us because of our pronunciation.But when I speak Japanese, I am unaware of it.>> Correct So their conversation is enjoyable>> Correct If I go to Japan again, I would like to talk deeper to Japanese
>> If I go to Japan again, I\'d like to talk to Japanese more deeply.
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