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I don\'t want my husband to be a leader
He has never been a leader since he was born.
If he wants to be a leader.
He should have lived there for over 10 years at least.
That\'s because he can convince them if something happens.
I think he is kind to others.
But his intention to be a leader is wrong.
Good leader is to be chosen from others .It is not from his choice.
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Great day, Ms. [Name]!
I understand your point and that is true, however, there are instances when our thoughts are beyond our expectations. For instance, A man is rich, and because of that, he becomes the leader of a small village, because people think that this man can help them in financial matters.
Aki~
I don\'t want my husband to be a leader
>>> CORRECT!
He has never been a leader since he was born.
>>> CORRECT!
If he wants to be a leader. He should have lived there for over 10 years at least.
>>> If he wants to be a leader, he should have lived there for over 10 years at least.
That\'s because he can convince them if something happens.
>>> CORRECT!
I think he is kind to others.
>>> CORRECT!
But his intention to be a leader is wrong.
>>> CORRECT!
Good leader is to be chosen from others .It is not from his choice.
>>> A good leader is to be chosen by others. It is not by his choice.
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