homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you like about your neighborhood?
I don’t live in a city in Korea, but I really like my neighborhood.
It’s where I was born and I’ve lived here all my life.
Maybe that’s why I don’t know much about other places.
Cities are too crowded and the traffic is terrible.
I enjoy hiking, and there are a lot of mountains near my home.
So I can go hiking whenever I have time.
My neighborhood is growing, so everything I need like a movie theater, supermarket, and schools is close by.
But the best part is that my friends and family all live here.
That’s why I love where I live.
강사 첨삭
Hi Isabel, your response was well-written and easy to understand! You did a great job organizing your ideas clearly and naturally. There were only a couple of minor corrections for smoother sentence flow and punctuation. Keep up the great work!
~ T. Lia
I don’t live in a city in Korea, but I really like my neighborhood.
>> CORRECT
It’s where I was born and I’ve lived here all my life.
>> CORRECT
Maybe that’s why I don’t know much about other places.
>> CORRECT
Cities are too crowded and the traffic is terrible.
>> CORRECT
I enjoy hiking, and there are a lot of mountains near my home.
>> CORRECT
So I can go hiking whenever I have time.
>> This allows me to go hiking whenever I have time.
My neighborhood is growing, so everything I need like a movie theater, supermarket, and schools is close by.
>> My neighborhood is growing, so everything I need, like a movie theater, a supermarket, and schools, is close by.
But the best part is that my friends and family all live here.
>> CORRECT
That’s why I love where I live.
>> CORRECT
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