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I had moved every 3 years before I bought a house.
I think it was different between rent a house and buy a house.
I didn\'t want to be close with people who lived in the same APT.
I didn\'t have the consciousness of community.
Because I thought I wouldn\'t live here in the future.
But now I feel comfortable that I could stay here if I want to live.
And People in each floor looks like neighbor.
I think Living in the same place for long time is the same as living in hometown.
강사 첨삭
Great day, Ms. [Name]!
I like your story, and I understand why you don\'t want to have an emotional investment with your previous neighbors because of that. You know, I have the same thought while working as an ESL teacher. Most teachers in this field come and go, so I don\'t invest too much in building relationships with my colleagues because it will bring a heartache once they leave.
Talk to you later.
T. Aki~
I had moved every 3 years before I bought a house.
>>> CORRECT!
I think it was different between rent a house and buy a house.
>>> I think it was different between renting a house and buying a house.
I didn\'t want to be close with people who lived in the same APT.
>>> I didn\'t want to be close to people who lived in the same APT.
I didn\'t have the consciousness of community.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I thought I wouldn\'t live here in the future.
>>> Because I thought I wouldn\'t live there for a long time.
But now I feel comfortable that I could stay here if I want to live.
>>> CORRECT!
And People in each floor looks like neighbor.
>>> And people living on each floor are my neighbors.
I think Living in the same place for long time is the same as living in hometown.
>> I think living in the same place for a long time is the same as living in your hometown.
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