homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to be popular because most people like me. but so much some people hate me. However, I want to be popular.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Na [이름]. It\'s interesting to know you want to be popular. I think you can be popular. You look pretty and you can dance. I hope to see you someday on TV as a celebrity. ^___^ Thank you once again for keeping up with your homework. See you in class tomorrow. Have a good night! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I want to be popular because most people like me.
>> I want to be popular because most people are going to like me.
but so much some people hate me.
>> But so many people will hate me.
However, I want to be popular.
>>OR: However, I still want to be popular.
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