HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: Write an essay about the place where you live in. Use the following sentence patterns.
Location
My place is situated in the middle of everything.
Building
The building was built 7 years ago.
Its interior is clean and simple.
The facade is clean and simple too.
Room
My room is on the entrance of the house.
It has one bed, one desk and two closet.
강사 첨삭
Hi Isabel, I just wanted to say that you did such a great job with your homework. You were able to use every keyword we discussed last evening, and it really shows how well you understood the lesson. Keep up the amazing work!
Its interior is clean and simple.
The facade is clean and simple too.
>> CORRECT
Room
My room is on the entrance of the house.
It has one bed, one desk and two closet.
~ T. Lia
Location
My place is situated in the middle of everything.
My place is situated in the middle of everything.
>> CORRECT
Building
The building was built 7 years ago.
>> CORRECT
Building
The building was built 7 years ago.
>> CORRECT
Its interior is clean and simple.
>> CORRECT
The facade is clean and simple too.
>> CORRECT
Room
My room is on the entrance of the house.
>> CORRECT
It has one bed, one desk and two closet.
>> It has one bed, one desk and two closets.
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