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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! It is been a long time to access this page. That means I haven’t studying hard and did not my best to keep my goals. I will have a lot of gathering during business trip in Jeju Island. So I need to refrain from alcohol this time. I think so that my TOEIC score will be determined by whether I drink or not.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, William. I\'m happy to see you writing again, and it\'s always a pleasure to read your essays. I wish you good luck on your business trip, but also, don\'t forget to have fun. I also wish you luck on your journey to sobriety ^^ I hope you arrived on Jeju Island safe and sound. I\'ll talk to you in class later. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
Hi there!
>> CORRECT
It is been a long time to access this page.
>> It has been a long time since I accessed this page.
That means I haven’t studying hard and did not my best to keep my goals.
>> That means I haven\'t been studying hard and doing my best to keep up with my goals.
I will have a lot of gathering during business trip in Jeju Island.
>> I will have a lot of things to do during my business trip on Jeju Island.
So I need to refrain from alcohol this time.
>> CORRECT
I think so that my TOEIC score will be determined by whether I drink or not.
>> I think that my TOEIC score will be determined by whether I drink or not.
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