homework
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Having friends is very important. Because have friends is not lonely. But having a good friend is better than having so many friends.
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Having friends is very important.
>> CORRECT
Because have friends is not lonely.
>> Because having friends is not lonely.
But having a good friend is better than having so many friends.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: But having that one good friend is better than having so many not-so-good friends.
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