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The severity of bullying varies and is subjective. So attackers always say it is just a part of growing up, but victims see it as a crime. I think we should focus on the victims\' perspectives because attackers can’t truly understand how they feel.
If it’s just a fight between friends, it could be considered a part of growing up. They need to talk it out and reconcile, learning something from the experience. But if it’s one-sided bullying, it should be seen as a crime. Attackers should reflect on their actions and apologize to the victims. Forgiveness is entirely up to the victims.
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Hello [이름],
It is important to make an effort to step forward in learning new things so that we can apply it our daily life.
T. Jeny
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So attackers always say it is just a part of growing up, but victims see it as a crime.
So attackers always say it is just a part of growing up, but victims see it as a crime.
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I think we should focus on the victims\' perspectives because attackers can’t truly understand how they feel.
>>correct
If it’s just a fight between friends, it could be considered a part of growing up.
If it’s just a fight between friends, it could be considered a part of growing up.
>>correct
They need to talk it out and reconcile, learning something from the experience.
They need to talk it out and reconcile, learning something from the experience.
>>correct
But if it’s one-sided bullying, it should be seen as a crime.
But if it’s one-sided bullying, it should be seen as a crime.
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Attackers should reflect on their actions and apologize to the victims.
Attackers should reflect on their actions and apologize to the victims.
>>correct
Forgiveness is entirely up to the victims.
Forgiveness is entirely up to the victims.
>>correct
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