homework
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HOMEWORK: Using the following sentence patterns, write an essay about your neighborhood.
Neighborhood
I reside at Asan Chungchungnamdo.
Good points
My neighborhood is mostly chlidren.
Bad points
The bad thing about my neighborhood is very noisy.
How you feel about your neighborhood
I don’t like my neighborhood because the noise make me can\'t s[이름]p.
강사 첨삭
Hi Isabel! You did a great job with your homework. Your answers were clear, and I only made a few small corrections. For example, \"The bad thing about my neighborhood is that it is very noisy,\" and \"I don’t like my neighborhood because the noise makes it hard for me to s[이름]p.\" Overall, your answers were clear, and with just a few adjustments, they sound even better.
~ T. Lia
Neighborhood
I reside at Asan Chungchungnamdo.
I reside at Asan Chungchungnamdo.
>> CORRECT
Good points
My neighborhood is mostly chlidren.
Good points
My neighborhood is mostly chlidren.
>> CORRECT
Bad points
The bad thing about my neighborhood is very noisy.
>> The bad thing about my neighborhood is that it is very noisy.
Bad points
The bad thing about my neighborhood is very noisy.
>> The bad thing about my neighborhood is that it is very noisy.
How you feel about your neighborhood
I don’t like my neighborhood because the noise make me can\'t s[이름]p.
>> I don’t like my neighborhood because the noise makes it hard for me to s[이름]p.
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