homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you prefer living in a large city or a small village? Why?
I prefer small cities over big ones.
because I don’t like crowded places.
I enjoy spending time in quiet areas where I can relax.
Since I have a car, I can drive wherever I need to go.
강사 첨삭
Hello Isabel, your response is clear and well-structured, with just a minor adjustment needed for sentence structure. Be mindful of starting sentences with lowercase letters when they should be capitalized. Other than that, great job expressing your preference concisely. Keep up the good work!
~ T. Lia
I prefer small cities over big ones.
>> CORRECT
because I don’t like crowded places.
>> Because I don’t like crowded places.
I enjoy spending time in quiet areas where I can relax.
>> CORRECT
Since I have a car, I can drive wherever I need to go.
>> CORRECT
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