homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) Are you from England?
Yes, I am.
2) Is she nice?
Yes, she is.
3) Are the friends at school?
Yes, they are.
4) Is the dog in the garden?
Yes, it is.
5) Are you 12?
No, I am not.
I have skipped my dinner since last week.
I drunk a cup of milk instead of rice every morning and evening.
I have lost my weight for 1 Kg.
I'm not satisfied with that result.
It's not enough than the pain that I suffer.
I need go on a diet continually.
I will wear s[이름]veless shirt and shorts that I can't wear usaually to go on a trip.
I have been thick on my forearm and thigh for 35 years.
I was a gymnast at 10 years old for 2 years.
Since I stopped exercise, I started being fat, especially my forearms and thighs.
My fat is very hard so it's not easy to loose weight.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name],
Thank you for sharing a bit of your story about you going on a diet..:)
I do believe that you can do that Miss. [Name]..ajah!!kkk
ANyway, well talk more about this later in our class..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
1) Are you from England?Yes, I am.>>correct2) Is she nice? Yes, she is.>>correct3) Are the friends at school? Yes, they are.>>correct4) Is the dog in the garden? Yes, it is.>>correct5) Are you 12? No, I am not.>>correctI have skipped my dinner since last week.
>>correctI drunk a cup of milk instead of rice every morning and evening.
>>I drink a cup of milk instead of rice every morning and evening.I have lost my weight for 1 Kg.
>>correctI\'m not satisfied with that result.
>>correctIt\'s not enough than the pain that I suffer.
>>It\'s not enough for me to suffer the pain.I need go on a diet continually.
>>I need to go on a diet continuously.I will wear s[이름]veless shirt and shorts that I can\'t wear usaually to go on a trip.
>>correctI have been thick on my forearm and thigh for 35 years.
>>My forearm and thighs have been big for 35 years.I was a gymnast at 10 years old for 2 years.
>>I was a gymnast when I was 10 for 2 years.Since I stopped exercise, I started being fat, especially my forearms and thighs.
>>Since I stopped exercising, I started to gain weight, especially on my forearms and thighs.My fat is very hard so it\'s not easy to loose weight.
>>correct
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