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2012-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) Are you from England? Yes, I am. 2) Is she nice? Yes, she is. 3) Are the friends at school? Yes, they are. 4) Is the dog in the garden? Yes, it is. 5) Are you 12? No, I am not. I have skipped my dinner since last week. I drunk a cup of milk instead of rice every morning and evening. I have lost my weight for 1 Kg. I'm not satisfied with that result. It's not enough than the pain that I suffer. I need go on a diet continually. I will wear s[이름]veless shirt and shorts that I can't wear usaually to go on a trip. I have been thick on my forearm and thigh for 35 years. I was a gymnast at 10 years old for 2 years. Since I stopped exercise, I started being fat, especially my forearms and thighs. My fat is very hard so it's not easy to loose weight.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], Thank you for sharing a bit of your story about you going on a diet..:) I do believe that you can do that Miss. [Name]..ajah!!kkk ANyway, well talk more about this later in our class.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) Are you from England?Yes, I am.>>correct2) Is she nice? Yes, she is.>>correct3) Are the friends at school? Yes, they are.>>correct4) Is the dog in the garden? Yes, it is.>>correct5) Are you 12? No, I am not.>>correctI have skipped my dinner since last week. >>correctI drunk a cup of milk instead of rice every morning and evening. >>I drink a cup of milk instead of rice every morning and evening.I have lost my weight for 1 Kg. >>correctI\'m not satisfied with that result. >>correctIt\'s not enough than the pain that I suffer. >>It\'s not enough for me to suffer the pain.I need go on a diet continually. >>I need to go on a diet continuously.I will wear s[이름]veless shirt and shorts that I can\'t wear usaually to go on a trip. >>correctI have been thick on my forearm and thigh for 35 years. >>My forearm and thighs have been big for 35 years.I was a gymnast at 10 years old for 2 years. >>I was a gymnast when I was 10 for 2 years.Since I stopped exercise, I started being fat, especially my forearms and thighs. >>Since I stopped exercising, I started to gain weight, especially on my forearms and thighs.My fat is very hard so it\'s not easy to loose weight. >>correct

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