homework

2025-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Lia

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HOMEWORK: Write an essay about your recent family dinner. Use the following sentence patterns. People you dined with I had dinner with my parents. Where you dined We dined at our house. Where you had dinner We shared a delectable meal at our dining room. What you talked about We talked about today\'s weather.

강사 첨삭

Hello Isabel. Well done! Your answers fit the sentence patterns well and show you understood the structure. Just a small improvement in preposition use (in our dining room) made your sentence sound more natural. Keep it up! You’re doing a great job following instructions and expressing your thoughts.

~ T. Lia

People you dined with
I had dinner with my parents.
>> CORRECT

Where you dined
We dined at our house.
>> CORRECT

Where you had dinner
We shared a delectable meal at our dining room.
>> We shared a delectable meal in our dining room.

What you talked about
We talked about today\'s weather.
>> CORRECT

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