homework
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HOMEWORK: Write an essay about your closest friend. Use the following sentence patterns.
Name of closest friend
If I were to name my closest friend, it would be Hyein.
First meeting
We first met in high school.
What you love doing together
We like to chat together.
강사 첨삭
Hello Isabel. You’ve shared your thoughts clearly and sincerely. It’s easy to feel how special your friendship with Hyein is. The simplicity of your answers actually makes your message more heartfelt. Keep writing like this, and don’t be afraid to add more details or feelings next time. You\'re expressing yourself well, and it\'s always a joy to see someone write with both clarity and warmth. Great job!
~ T. Lia
Name of closest friend
If I were to name my closest friend, it would be Hyein.
If I were to name my closest friend, it would be Hyein.
>> CORRECT
First meeting
We first met in high school.
First meeting
We first met in high school.
>> CORRECT
What you love doing together
We like to chat together.
What you love doing together
We like to chat together.
>> CORRECT
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