Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Old people\'s bad eyesight is the worst condition for learning English.
It makes me reducing about my passion for English.
I don\'t want to look at the book wearing glasses.
It feels dizzy and anoying.
So I want to memorize the words before wearing old person\'s glasses .
Therefore there is the expiration date for learning English.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [Name]!
Yes, there are factors contributing to losing interest in learning English or other classes. So while we are still young, let\'s try to explore things we are not familiar with.
Aki~
Old people\'s bad eyesight is the worst condition for learning English.
>>> Old people\'s bad eyesight has worsened the condition for learning English.
It makes me reducing about my passion for English.
>>> It makes me lose my passion for English.
I don\'t want to look at the book wearing glasses.
>>> CORRECT!
It feels dizzy and anoying.
>>> It makes me feel dizzy and annoyed.
So I want to memorize the words before wearing old person\'s glasses .
>>> CORRECT!
Therefore there is the expiration date for learning English.
>>> Therefore, there is an expiration date for learning English.
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