homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Things inside the room
In my room, there is a bed, a desk, a bookshelf and two closet cabinets.
Position of things
Next to the my bed is window.
How you perceive your room
I consider my room as My own shelter.
강사 첨삭
Hi Isabel. Your writing gives a nice and personal glimpse into your space. Calling your room a “shelter” shows how important it is to you. It’s more than just a place to s[이름]p, it’s where you feel safe and at peace. Great job expressing that feeling! Keep it up. You’re improving in both clarity and creativity.
~ T. Lia
Things inside the room
In my room, there is a bed, a desk, a bookshelf and two closet cabinets.
>> In my room, there is a bed, a desk, a bookshelf, and two closet cabinets.
Position of things
Next to the my bed is window.
>> Next to my bed is a window.
How you perceive your room
I consider my room as My own shelter.
>> I consider my room my own shelter.
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