homework
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HOMEWORK: Why is it important to have a good relationship with your neighbors?
It’s important to have a good relationship with my neighbors because I can help each other.
Especially in an emergency, it’s really helpful to have someone near by who can help right away.
Also, having good neighbors make me feel safer and more comfortable at home.
I can also share things or look after each other’s houses when someone is away.
Even just saying hello or chatting a bit can make the neighborhood feel friendlier.
강사 첨삭
Hi Isabel. Your writing beautifully shows how important it is to build a friendly and supportive neighborhood. The small things like sharing, helping, or simply saying hello can really make a big difference. You expressed that very clearly and thoughtfully. Keep writing like this, you\'re doing a great job!
~ T. Lia
It’s important to have a good relationship with my neighbors because I can help each other.
>> It’s important to have a good relationship with my neighbors because we can help each other.
Especially in an emergency, it’s really helpful to have someone near by who can help right away.
>> Especially in an emergency, it’s really helpful to have someone nearby who can help right away.
Also, having good neighbors make me feel safer and more comfortable at home.
>> Also, having good neighbors makes me feel safer and more comfortable at home.
I can also share things or look after each other’s houses when someone is away.
>> We can also share things or look after each other’s houses when someone is away.
Even just saying hello or chatting a bit can make the neighborhood feel friendlier.
>> CORRECT
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