Homework

2012-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Dear [Name].Sally, I finished my home work. As for my job, I don't feel pleasure any more. It is a litte different from 'a cog in the machine' Anyway, I'm waiting for other opportunities. If I didn't passed last application, I'll wait for job opening until this August. I hope my waiting will be finished early. 1) My friend is good at playing volleyball. 2) She complains of bullying. 3) They are afraid of losing the match. 4) She doesn't feel in working on the computer. 5) We are looking forward to going out at the weekend. 6) Laura dreams of living on a small island. 7) Andrew apologized for being late. 8) Do you agree about staying in a foreign country? 9) The girls insisted on going out with Kerry. 10) Edward thinks of climbing trees this afternoon.

강사 첨삭

Hello there,            Good afternoon! thank you for sending your homework. I wish you good luck on your application. Don\'t lose hope I know it will come at the right time. See you! Have a wonderful day! -Teacher Sally- Dear [Name].Sally,>>CorrectI finished my home work.>>CorrectAs for my job, I don\'t feel pleasure any more. >>CorrectIt is a litte different from \'a cog in the machine\'>>CorrectAnyway, I\'m waiting for other opportunities. >>CorrectIf I didn\'t passed last application, I\'ll wait for job opening until this August. >>If I didn\'t pass my last application, I\'ll wait for job opening until this August.I hope my waiting will be finished early. >>Correct1) My friend is good at playing volleyball. >>Correct2) She complains of bullying. >>She complains about bullying.3) They are afraid of losing the match. >>Correct4) She doesn\'t feel in working on the computer. >>She doesn\'t feel like working in the computer.5) We are looking forward to going out at the weekend. >>Correct6) Laura dreams of living on a small island. >>Correct7) Andrew apologized for being late. >>Correct8) Do you agree about staying in a foreign country? >>Do you agree with staying in a foreign country?9) The girls insisted on going out with Kerry. >>The girls insisted on gonig out with kerry.10) Edward thinks of climbing trees this afternoon. >>Correct

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