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I already said that I have a lot of free time this year, so I want to try everything which I postpone. I\'ll go to the vocal academy that my favorite artist \' [이름] chang sub\' runs. I\'m always eager to check my vocal problems and improve singing skills. I\'ve watched the animation: Attack on Titan and yesterday I went to the movie which show final series of the animation. It is right up my alley. So I\'ll try another famous animations and I want to learn Japanese.
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Hi, [이름]^^
Thank you for sharing.
I believe watching animations would help you learn Japanese easily.
_T. SHAY^^
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I already said that I have a lot of free time this year, so I want to try everything which I postpone.
Thank you for sharing.
I believe watching animations would help you learn Japanese easily.
_T. SHAY^^
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I already said that I have a lot of free time this year, so I want to try everything which I postpone.
>>I already said that I have a lot of free time this year, so I want to try everything I\'ve postponed.
OR: Since I have a lot of free time this year, I want to finally try everything I\'ve put off.
OR: Since I have a lot of free time this year, I want to finally try everything I\'ve put off.
I\'ll go to the vocal academy that my favorite artist \' [이름] chang sub\' runs.
>>I\'m going to the vocal academy that my favorite artist, [이름] Chang Sub, runs.
I\'m always eager to check my vocal problems and improve singing skills.
I\'m always eager to check my vocal problems and improve singing skills.
>>I\'m always eager to identify my vocal issues and improve my singing skills.
I\'ve watched the animation: Attack on Titan and yesterday I went to the movie which show final series of the animation. >>I watched the animation Attack on Titan, and yesterday I went to the theater to see the movie that concludes the series.
It is right up my alley.
I\'ve watched the animation: Attack on Titan and yesterday I went to the movie which show final series of the animation. >>I watched the animation Attack on Titan, and yesterday I went to the theater to see the movie that concludes the series.
It is right up my alley.
>>Correct
OR: That anime is right up my alley.
So I\'ll try another famous animations and I want to learn Japanese.
OR: That anime is right up my alley.
So I\'ll try another famous animations and I want to learn Japanese.
>>So, I\'ll watch other famous animations, and I want to learn Japanese.
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