homework
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I can imagine a day without gadgets. But I can’t live without them.
I use my phone to talk to people, check the news, and even study.
Without gadgets, everything feels less convenient and slower.
They’re a big part of my daily life now.
강사 첨삭
Hello Isabel. Your response is simple, clear, and relatable. You’ve done a great job expressing your thoughts in a natural and concise way. Just remember that short sentences can often be joined for better flow. Keep writing, you\'re showing excellent progress with your sentence structure and clarity.
~ T. Lia
I can imagine a day without gadgets. But I can’t live without them.
>> I can imagine a day without gadgets, but I can’t live without them.
I use my phone to talk to people, check the news, and even study.
>> CORRECT
Without gadgets, everything feels less convenient and slower.
>> CORRECT
They’re a big part of my daily life now.
>> CORRECT
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