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I think hardest thing about apology is needing brave. Even if we really admired our faults, it is really hard to apologize at first. Furthermore, sometimes we need to apologize when we don\'t make a fault because we prevent the situations from getting worse. Then we may feel ashamed or have to take responsibility because of my apology.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, you\'re right. There are times when we have to say sorry even though it\'s not even our fault.
_T. SHAY^^
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I think hardest thing about apology is needing brave.
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, you\'re right. There are times when we have to say sorry even though it\'s not even our fault.
_T. SHAY^^
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I think hardest thing about apology is needing brave.
>>I think the hardest thing about apology is having courage.
OR: I think the hardest thing about apology is being brave.
Even if we really admired our faults, it is really hard to apologize at first.
Even if we really admired our faults, it is really hard to apologize at first.
>>Even if we acknowledge our fault, it is really hard to apologize at first.
Furthermore, sometimes we need to apologize when we don\'t make a fault because we prevent the situations from getting worse.
>>Furthermore, sometimes we need to apologize even if it\'s not our fault because it\'s one way to prevent the situation from getting worse.
Then we may feel ashamed or have to take responsibility because of my apology.
>>Then we may feel ashamed or have to take responsibility because of the apology.
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