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2012-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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1) Are you studying in Australia? Yes, I am. 2) Is your sister 11? Yes, She is. 3) Are your mom and dad at the office? Yes, they are. 4) Is the bunny on it's cage? Yes, it is 5) Are you a middle school student? No, I am. I don't have a car. So when I go to work, I take my coworker's car. My coworker, she works at the reception area in our university. She worked different department with me but she was very kind to me. When I came here first, she went house-hunting for me. I really appreaciated her. But I was afraid of her driving nowdays. She is very short. When she sits in the driver's seat, she can't see forward as others. And she always drives over the centerline. When she wants to turn left or park in left side, she even drives left lane. Here is a country. Fortunately, there is not much traffic. So I have been alive yet. I had the near-death experience several times. I'm seriously thinking of buying my car.

강사 첨삭

Wow!!Thats an amazing story you have for me today Miss. [Name].. I cant believe that you had a lot of near death experiences.. I think its about time for you to nuy your own car,kkk..Anyway.. We will talk more about that later in our class.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) Are you studying in Australia?Yes, I am.>>correct2) Is your sister 11? Yes, She is.>>correct3) Are your mom and dad at the office? Yes, they are.>>correct4) Is the bunny on it\'s cage? Yes, it is>>correct5) Are you a middle school student? No, I am.>>No Im not.I don\'t have a car. >>correctSo when I go to work, I take my coworker\'s car. >>correctMy coworker, she works at the reception area in our university. >>correct >>My coworker works ate the reception area in our university.She worked different department with me but she was very kind to me. >>She worked in different departments with me but she was very kind to me.When I came here first, she went house-hunting for me. >>correct >>The first time I came here, she looked for a house for me.I really appreaciated her. >>correctBut I was afraid of her driving nowdays. >>But I was afraid of her driving nowadays.She is very short. >>correct When she sits in the driver\'s seat, she can\'t see forward as others.>>When she sits in the driver\'s seat,she wasnt able to see the things infront of her. And she always drives over the centerline. >>correct When she wants to turn left or park in left side, she even drives left lane.>>When she wants to turn left of park in the left side, she even drives at the left lane. Here is a country. Fortunately, there is not much traffic.>>This place is a rural area so there isn\'t much heavy traffic. So I have been alive yet. >>correctI had the near-death experience several times. >>correctI\'m seriously thinking of buying my car. >>correct  

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