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I love his character he is honest.
when I ask something like dating or suggestion, he said to me honestly .
He doesn\'t use his brain to trick to me.
His simple mind gives me reliable.
It also caused I could forgave him even if when he hurt my mind.
He is getting older. He tends to tell a lie and ignore me.
So I am still arguing with him or give up arguing about our problem.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]!
I am not in a position to give my piece of advice since your relationship with your husband is longer compared to mine. One thing that I am learning about relationships, people change, and it is challenging to stick to the same person whom you got married to. Divorce for me will not always be the solution unless it causes a grave threat.
Thank yo for sharing.
Aki~
I love his character he is honest.
>>> I love his character; he is honest.
when I ask something like dating or suggestion, he said to me honestly .
>>> When I ask something like dating or a suggestion, he says to me honestly.
He doesn\'t use his brain to trick to me.
>>> He doesn\'t use his brain to trick me.
His simple mind gives me reliable.
>>> His simple mind gives me reliability.
It also caused I could forgave him even if when he hurt my mind.
>>> It also caused me to forgive him even when he offended me.
He is getting older. He tends to tell a lie and ignore me.
>>> CORRECT!
So I am still arguing with him or give up arguing about our problem.
>>> So I am still arguing with him, or give up arguing about our problem.
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