homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Gadget
The gadget I am going to write about is a smartphon.
Use
My smartphon isn’t only used to calling, it can also be used to everythin.
Importance
It is very important to me because I\'m always use smartphon.
강사 첨삭
Hi Isabel. You\'re on the right track by organizing your ideas clearly into sections. That’s a good habit! Watch out for spelling errors (like \"smartphon\" - \"smartphone\") and double-check small grammar points, such as verb forms (\"I’m always use\" - \"I always use\"). Keep practicing. Your structure is already solid, and your writing will become stronger with more attention to details.
Use
My smartphon isn’t only used to calling, it can also be used to everythin.
>> My smartphone isn’t only used for calling; it can also be used for everything.
Importance
It is very important to me because I\'m always use smartphon.
~ T. Lia
Gadget
The gadget I am going to write about is a smartphon.
>> The gadget I am going to write about is a smartphone.
The gadget I am going to write about is a smartphon.
>> The gadget I am going to write about is a smartphone.
Use
My smartphon isn’t only used to calling, it can also be used to everythin.
>> My smartphone isn’t only used for calling; it can also be used for everything.
Importance
It is very important to me because I\'m always use smartphon.
>> It is very important to me because I always use my smartphone.
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