homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: Write an essay about your part-time job. Use the following sentence patterns.
Job / Position
I work there as a Designer.
Company
I’m doing full time employee at a decoration tile company.
Task
I am in charge of Product design, package, and pattern development.
강사 첨삭
Hi Isabel. You’re doing a great job explaining your role! Just remember to check capitalization (like \"Product\" - \"product\") and make sure your job descriptions are clear. \"Full-time\" and \"decorative\" help make the meaning even clearer. Keep going, your writing is improving.
~ T. Lia
~ T. Lia
I work there as a Designer.
>> I work there as a designer.
I’m doing full time employee at a decoration tile company.
>> I’m a full-time employee at a decorative tile company.
I am in charge of Product design, package, and pattern development.
>> I am in charge of product design, packaging, and pattern development.
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