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My favorite holiday is lunar calendar New Year’s Day. I can meet most of my cousin that holiday. I have more than 20 cousins and they are 20’s. Our interests are similar. But we have different view, because each person has a different character and job. So when we meet, we have carious conversation topic. It is really funny. Also, we can meet in Korean Thanksgiving Day. But I’m week at hot weather. Korean Thanksgiving Day is end of summer. I prefer New Year’s Day to it.

Hi ^_^ Thank you for sending me your composition. For me,New Year\'s Day is also my favorite holiday. This is the time that I am with my whole family to celebrate it. Congratulations! You were able to express your thoughts well. Keep it up! You just have to bank up more vocabularies inorder for you to compose credible sentences. Have a great night and rest well tonight! High five for your performance today! Job well done ^_^ See you again! T.Razel My favorite holiday is lunar calendar New Year’s Day. >>My favorite holiday is Lunar New Year\'s Day. I can meet most of my cousin that holiday. >>I can meet most of my cousins iin that holiday. I have more than 20 cousins and they are 20’s. >>I have more than 20 cousins and they are in the age of 20\'s. Our interests are similar. >>Correct But we have different view, because each person has a different character and job. >>But we have different views, because each person has a different character and personality. So when we meet, we have carious conversation topic. >>When we meet,we have various topics to talk about. >>OR When we meet,we have a lot of things to talk about. It is really funny. >>CorrectAlso, we can meet in Korean Thanksgiving Day. >>We can also meet during Korean\'s Thanksgiving Day. But I’m week at hot weather. >>I\'m weak during a hot weather. Korean Thanksgiving Day is end of summer. >>Korean Thanksgiving Day is by at the end of summer. I prefer New Year’s Day to it. >>I prefer New Year\'s Day than Thanksgiving Day.