homework

2025-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Lia

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HOMEWORK: Write an essay about your boss. Use the following sentence patterns. First impression My first impression of my boss was he’s a careful guy. Physical appearance He is about 170cm tall and has big eyes. Personality Everyone in the workplace likes him because he is very gentle.

강사 첨삭

Well done Isabel! Your descriptions are clear and structured, and they give a positive image of your boss. Just make sure to complete your sentence patterns fully. For example, using “was that…” after reporting impressions. Keep writing with this level of clarity and organization.

~ T. Lia

First impression
My first impression of my boss was he’s a careful guy.

>> My first impression of my boss was that he’s a careful guy.

Physical appearance
He is about 170cm tall and has big eyes.

>> CORRECT

Personality
Everyone in the workplace likes him because he is very gentle.

>> CORRECT

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