Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I take a walk, I used to organize my mind or
I am preoccupied with other\'s characters.
I think I am interested in people who I can learn something
that I don\'t have.
Most people I have known are fascinating and unique.
They teach and show me wisdom through their behavior.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]!
That\'s the word \"like\" is describing. We tend to meet people because we learn and get inspiration from them. Otherwise, we will be avoiding them.
Have a good afternoon!
Aki~
When I take a walk, I used to organize my mind or I am preoccupied with other\'s characters.
>>> When I take a walk, I usually organize my thoughts or find myself thinking about other people\'s personalities.
I think I am interested in people who I can learn something that I don\'t have.
>>> I think I am interested in people whom I can learn something that I don\'t know.
Most people I have known are fascinating and unique.
>>> CORRECT!
They teach and show me wisdom through their behavior.
>>> They taught and showed me wisdom through their behavior.
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