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I want to try jiu jitsu because I was impressed when I saw a phrase which promote jiu jitsu. It says jiu iitsu is an only exercise that weak people can beat strong people. I want to protect myself from bad people. But it\'s too expensive to learn because of uniform. There are many people who hurts when they\'re learning jiu jitsu, so I scared of trying jiu jitsu. Maybe I might just think about jiu jitsu not try it. But someday every condition is good to learn jiu jitsu then I\'ll try it!
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
That\'s really interesting.
_T. SHAY^^
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I want to try jiu jitsu because I was impressed when I saw a phrase which promote jiu jitsu.
Thank you for sharing.
That\'s really interesting.
_T. SHAY^^
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I want to try jiu jitsu because I was impressed when I saw a phrase which promote jiu jitsu.
>>I want to try jiu-jitsu because I was impressed when I saw a phrase which promotes jiu-jitsu.
It says jiu iitsu is an only exercise that weak people can beat strong people.
>>It says, \"jiu-jitsu is the only form of exercise where the weak people can beat strong people.\"
I want to protect myself from bad people.
>>Correct
OR: I want to be able to fight for myself from bad people.
OR: I want to be able to fight for myself from bad people.
But it\'s too expensive to learn because of uniform.
>>The thing is, it\'s too expensive because of the uniform.
There are many people who hurts when they\'re learning jiu jitsu, so I scared of trying jiu jitsu.
There are many people who hurts when they\'re learning jiu jitsu, so I scared of trying jiu jitsu.
>>Also, there are many people who get hurt when they learn jiu-jitsu, so I\'m scared of trying jiu-jitsu.
Maybe I might just think about jiu jitsu not try it.
Maybe I might just think about jiu jitsu not try it.
>>I\'m just considering it, but I\'m not going to try it.
But someday every condition is good to learn jiu jitsu then I\'ll try it!
But someday every condition is good to learn jiu jitsu then I\'ll try it!
>>But someday if I am given the chance to learn and if my body is ready, then I\'ll try.
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