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I think frank people are better than two faced people and I have some friends who are straightforward. When I met her at first , I thought she was a little bit rude and self-assertive. But after being close to her, I feel more comfortable with her. Because I can also say frankly and we can admire each opinion. And now I know ‘frankness’ is different from ‘rudeness’. I can distinguish them by their intention. People say frankly and want to make others feel bad, then I hate those people.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
You\'re right about those things.
_T. SHAY^^
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I think frank people are better than two faced people and I have some friends who are straightforward.
Thank you for sharing.
You\'re right about those things.
_T. SHAY^^
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I think frank people are better than two faced people and I have some friends who are straightforward.
>>I think frank people are better than two-faced people. Actually, I have some friends who are straightforward.
When I met her at first , I thought she was a little bit rude and self-assertive.
When I met her at first , I thought she was a little bit rude and self-assertive.
>>When I first met one of my friends, I thought she was a little bit rude and assertive.
But after being close to her, I feel more comfortable with her. Because I can also say frankly and we can admire each opinion.
But after being close to her, I feel more comfortable with her. Because I can also say frankly and we can admire each opinion.
>>But after being close to her, I feel more comfortable with her because I can also speak frankly and we can admire each other\'s opinion.
And now I know ‘frankness’ is different from ‘rudeness’.
And now I know ‘frankness’ is different from ‘rudeness’.
>>Correct
OR: And now I know that frankness and rudeness are totally different.
I can distinguish them by their intention.
OR: And now I know that frankness and rudeness are totally different.
I can distinguish them by their intention.
>>Correct
OR: They differ based on the intention of the speaker.
People say frankly and want to make others feel bad, then I hate those people.
OR: They differ based on the intention of the speaker.
People say frankly and want to make others feel bad, then I hate those people.
>>Some people speak frankly because they want to make others feel bad. I hate those kinds of people.
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