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I really like shopping for groceries on offline malls. Whenever I do shopping for food, it’s fun for me. And I really love shopping (on? Or at?) a market when I travel abroad. I don’t often shopping for clothes but I bought a lot of clothes with my mother when seasons are changed. The best shopping for clothes is when I bought the dress for my brother’s wedding. That’s not my usual style of clothes but it’s really pretty and expensive. So I’m really satisfied with that shopping!
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Well, it was for a special occasion that\'s why it was memorable.
_T. SHAY^^
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I really like shopping for groceries on offline malls.
Thank you for sharing.
Well, it was for a special occasion that\'s why it was memorable.
_T. SHAY^^
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I really like shopping for groceries on offline malls.
>>I really like shopping for groceries at offline malls.
Whenever I do shopping for food, it’s fun for me.
>>Correct
OR: I enjoy shopping for food.
OR: I enjoy shopping for food.
And I really love shopping (on? Or at?) a market when I travel abroad.
>>And I really love shopping at a market when I travel abroad.
I don’t often shopping for clothes but I bought a lot of clothes with my mother when seasons are changed.
>>I don\'t often shop for clothes but I buy a lot of clothes with my mother when the seasons change.
The best shopping for clothes is when I bought the dress for my brother’s wedding.
>>The best shopping experience I had was when I bought a dress for my brother\'s wedding.
That’s not my usual style of clothes but it’s really pretty and expensive.
>>Correct
OR: That\'s not my usual style of clothing, but it\'s really pretty and expensive.
OR: That\'s not my usual style of clothing, but it\'s really pretty and expensive.
So I’m really satisfied with that shopping!
>>So I\'m really satisfied with that purchase!
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