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I\'ve usually wore the clothes which are my personal color before the test. But sometimes I wear a vivid color cloth like bright orange or red. I knew pastel tone clothes suit me well, but I wanted to buy various color clothes. After learnig my personal color I give my mother them. And I misunderstood my personal color, so I bought unmatched cosmetic. I give it to my friend whose personal color is that kind of color and I bought new one.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Oh! At least, you were able to give them as gifts.
_T. SHAY^^
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I\'ve usually wore the clothes which are my personal color before the test.
Thank you for sharing.
Oh! At least, you were able to give them as gifts.
_T. SHAY^^
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I\'ve usually wore the clothes which are my personal color before the test.
>>I\'ve usually worn the clothes with my personal color before taking the test.
But sometimes I wear a vivid color cloth like bright orange or red.
>>But sometimes I wear a vivid color clothes like bright orange or red.
I knew pastel tone clothes suit me well, but I wanted to buy various color clothes.
>>I knew pastel-toned clothes suit me well, but I wanted to try wearing clothes in different colors.
After learnig my personal color I give my mother them.
>>After learning my personal color, I gave them to my mother.
And I misunderstood my personal color, so I bought unmatched cosmetic.
>>And I misunderstood my personal color, so I bought unmatched cosmetics.
I give it to my friend whose personal color is that kind of color and I bought new one.
>>I gave it to my friend whose personal color is that kind of color and I bought a new one.
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