Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
esoteric : escoteric means understand few people.
Make a sentence : If the book is tired it will be escoteric.
In a quandary : In a quandary means very embarrassed.
Make a sentecne : I was running but i fall so i'm in a quandary.
Teacher, I write a book report. If i wrong please change right.
<The Christmas stories>
There was a woman named Della.
She is very poor but she wants to give a gift to his husband.
But she has no money. Della has beautiful, long, brown hair.
so she cut her hair and sell her hair and she receive 20 dollars.
Then, she buy watch to his busband.
And her husband give a gift to Della.
Della is very happy because the gift was comb.
That comb is very expensive.
Few minutes later the husband thinks 'The present isn't important. Most important thing is our love.'
Thery'r poor but they have rich love.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework today! ^^ This is such a beautiful story but it\'s a bit sad. :( Too bad she can\'t use the expensive comb now coz she cut her beautiful, long hair already. Well done here. Please review my corrections and good luck on the book report! CIAO!
~Teacher Marie~
esoteric : escoteric means understand few people.
>> It can only be understood by a few people.
*Esoteric :)Make a sentence : If the book is tired it will be escoteric.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Some books are esoteric.In a quandary : In a quandary means very embarrassed.
>> CORRECTMake a sentecne : I was running but i fall so i\'m in a quandary.>> I was running late for school when I slipped and fell. Now I\'m in a quandary.
*Sentence ;)Teacher, I write a book report.
>> I wrote a book report.
If i wrong please change right.>> Please correct my mistakes.<The Christmas stories>
>> CORRECT
OR >> A Christmas Story.There was a woman named Della.
>> CORRECTShe is very poor but she wants to give a gift to his husband. >> CORRECT
OR >> She is very poor but she wants to give a gift to her husband.
But she has no money.
>> CORRECT
Della has beautiful, long, brown hair.
>> CORRECTso she cut her hair and sell her hair and she receive 20 dollars.
>> So she cut her hair and sold it for 20 dollars.Then, she buy watch to his busband.
>> Then she bought her husband a watch.And her husband give a gift to Della.
>> CORRECTDella is very happy because the gift was comb.
>> Della was very happy because her husband gave her a comb.That comb is very expensive.
>> That comb was very expensive.Few minutes later the husband thinks \'The present isn\'t important.
>> A few minutes later the husband thought, \"The present isn\'t important.\"
Most important thing is our love.\'
>> \"What\'s more important is our love.\"Thery\'r poor but they have rich love.
>> They might be poor but they are rich in love.
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