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I don’t think so, cosmetics also can protect our skin. We can use cosmetics to just protect aging and improve our skin barrier. Even if we had a lot of confidence, it isn’t relate to improve our appearance. Anyone want to look pretty and handsome, just be satisfied ourselves.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Indeed! Our confidence should not rely on our appearance.
_T. SHAY^^
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I don’t think so, cosmetics also can protect our skin.
>>I don\'t think so. Cosmetics can also protect our skin.
We can use cosmetics to just protect aging and improve our skin barrier.
>>We can use cosmetics to protect our skin from aging and improve our skin barrier.
Even if we had a lot of confidence, it isn’t relate to improve our appearance.
>>Even if we have a lot of confidence, it isn\'t related to improving our appearance.
Anyone want to look pretty and handsome, just be satisfied ourselves.
>>Everyone wants to look pretty and handsome. We just need to be satisfied with ourselves.
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