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2025-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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When I buy something I ask myself that \'is this really important to me?\'. And I can afford to buy it then I finally determine to buy it. And I browse again because another sites often sell same product cheaper price. But I often determine something impulsively without thoughts. Sometimes I\'m gonna trying to decide for a long time if I should do something because it is very important to me. And I feel very tired to think about that and I suddenly conclude that problem and avoid thinking about that again.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Megan^^
Yes. Of course, if it is very important, we should take it seriously and give it careful thought.
_T. SHAY^^
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When I buy something I ask myself that \'is this really important to me?\'.

>>Before buying something, I ask myself, \"is this really important to me?\"
And I can afford to buy it then I finally determine to buy it.

>>And if I can afford to buy it, then I am finally determined to buy it.

And I browse again because another sites often sell same product cheaper price.

>>And I browse more because other sites often sell the same product at a cheaper price.

But I often determine something impulsively without thoughts.

>>But most of the time I make decision impulsively without thinking.

Sometimes I\'m gonna trying to decide for a long time if I should do something because it is very important to me.

>>Sometimes I spend a long time trying to decide whether I should do something because it is very important to me.

And I feel very tired to think about that and I suddenly conclude that problem and avoid thinking about that again.

>>And I feel very tired to think about that and I suddenly conclude and avoid thinking about that again.

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