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I usually sit near the door because I want to get off easily and check my card quickly. And when I need to ride a bus for a long time, then I sit beside the window. Because I can lean on the window! And I wish that no one sit my next seat.
When I go to a cinema then I usually sit in the middle because I want to see the movie clearly. And when I go to a cinema alone, then I leave a blank seat next to the reserved seat. I don\'t like strangers sit beside me. It\'s little bit bothering me.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing!
I also feel uncomfortable sitting with strangers
especially when I feel s[이름]py while riding a bus
or any public transportation.
_T. SHAY^^
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I usually sit near the door because I want to get off easily and check my card quickly.
Thank you for sharing!
I also feel uncomfortable sitting with strangers
especially when I feel s[이름]py while riding a bus
or any public transportation.
_T. SHAY^^
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I usually sit near the door because I want to get off easily and check my card quickly.
>>Correct
OR: Most of the time, I sit near the door because I want to get off easily and check my card quickly.
OR: Most of the time, I sit near the door because I want to get off easily and check my card quickly.
And when I need to ride a bus for a long time, then I sit beside the window. Because I can lean on the window!
>>And when I need to ride a bus for a long time, then I sit beside the window because I can lean on the window!
OR: When it comes to long distance trips, I take the window seat because I can lean on the window!
OR: When it comes to long distance trips, I take the window seat because I can lean on the window!
And I wish that no one sit my next seat.
>>And I wish no one sits next to me.
When I go to a cinema then I usually sit in the middle because I want to see the movie clearly.
When I go to a cinema then I usually sit in the middle because I want to see the movie clearly.
>>When I go to a cinema, then I usually sit in the middle because I want to see the movie clearly.
OR: When I go to a cinema, I usually choose the middle part because I want to see the movie clearly.
And when I go to a cinema alone, then I leave a blank seat next to the reserved seat.
And when I go to a cinema alone, then I leave a blank seat next to the reserved seat.
>>And when I go to a cinema alone, then I leave an empty seat next to the reserved seat.
I don\'t like strangers sit beside me.
I don\'t like strangers sit beside me.
>>I don\'t like strangers to sit beside me.
It\'s little bit bothering me.
It\'s little bit bothering me.
>>It\'s bothers me a little.
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