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First, company’s benefits are important to me. There are a lot of kind of benefits like using delicious company restaurant for free or cheaper price and supporting us to study anything to develop ourselves. And I want to use my annual leave anytime that I want to use. If I am allowed to wish so much,I want to work flexible hours.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I can tell that you really love learning.
_T. SHAY^^
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First, company’s benefits are important to me.
Thank you for sharing.
I can tell that you really love learning.
_T. SHAY^^
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First, company’s benefits are important to me.
>>First, the company\'s benefits are important to me.
There are a lot of kind of benefits like using delicious company restaurant for free or cheaper price and supporting us to study anything to develop ourselves.
There are a lot of kind of benefits like using delicious company restaurant for free or cheaper price and supporting us to study anything to develop ourselves.
>>There are a lot benefits, such as free meals from the company restaurant/canteen and support for professional development.
And I want to use my annual leave anytime that I want to use.
And I want to use my annual leave anytime that I want to use.
>>And I want to use my annual leave any time I want to use it.
If I am allowed to wish so much,I want to work flexible hours.
>>If I am allowed to have a request, I want to work flexible hours.
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