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When I was young, I wanted to buy a small and cute car. But now I know that those are often ignored by others in Korea because others think the drivers of those are women. And I don’t want to be ignored by them, so I’ll buy just basic sedan not small one. I also want it to protect me because I can’t trust my driving skills.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I can relate. I wanted to have the Volkswagen Beetle when I was young.
_T. SHAY^^
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When I was young, I wanted to buy a small and cute car.
Thank you for sharing.
I can relate. I wanted to have the Volkswagen Beetle when I was young.
_T. SHAY^^
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When I was young, I wanted to buy a small and cute car.
>>Correct
OR: As a child, I dreamed of owning a small, cute car.
But now I know that those are often ignored by others in Korea because others think the drivers of those are women.
OR: As a child, I dreamed of owning a small, cute car.
But now I know that those are often ignored by others in Korea because others think the drivers of those are women.
>>Correct
OR: But now I know that those are often ignored by others in Korea because most people think women drive those cars.
And I don’t want to be ignored by them, so I’ll buy just basic sedan not small one.
OR: But now I know that those are often ignored by others in Korea because most people think women drive those cars.
And I don’t want to be ignored by them, so I’ll buy just basic sedan not small one.
>>And I don’t want to be ignored by them, so I’ll just buy a basic sedan, not a small one.
I also want it to protect me because I can’t trust my driving skills.
I also want it to protect me because I can’t trust my driving skills.
>>Correct
OR: I also want to get a car that can protect me because I don\'t trust my driving skills.
OR: I also want to get a car that can protect me because I don\'t trust my driving skills.
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