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2025-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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I haven\'t experienced hitchhiking. But if it means that I get in the awkward person\'s car, I had some experiences similar to hitchhiking. When I did the volunteer work, it\'s a real countryside and we don\'t have any car. So we just walked in hot summer. The leader of that village saw us by chance and took us by his car.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Actually, getting into someone\'s car even if you know that person can still be awkward sometimes. 
_T. SHAY^^
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I haven\'t experienced hitchhiking. 
>>Correct
OR: I\'ve never tried hitchhiking.
But if it means that I get in the awkward person\'s car, I had some experiences similar to hitchhiking. 
>>But when it comes to getting into someone\'s car and feeling that awkward atmosphere--yes I\'ve experienced it.
When I did the volunteer work, it\'s a real countryside and we don\'t have any car. 
>>I did my volunteer work in the countryside, and we didn\'t have any car.
So we just walked in hot summer. 
>>So we just walked outside on a hot summer day.
The leader of that village saw us by chance and took us by his car.
>>Correct
OR: The village leader saw us by chance and gave us a ride. 

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