homework
학생이 쓴 원문
um.. in my case
If i want to good relationship someone? contact is very important.
like see often face, with activities and do anything.
I think doing interest activity make good relationship.
who is similar mind? mental? someone like me.
The more physically activities more close and sometimes having a meal together
It is good to know each other.
How about you?
강사 첨삭
Hello Jon !!!
We really need to put our best foot forward to achieve a goal in our life especially in learning English.
I know it will be a long process but if we don\'t give up....we can be happy and successful!!!!
Have a great day ahead!!!!
T. Jeny
>>In my case, if I want to have a good relationship with someone.
contact is very important.
contact is very important.
>>Having a conversation is important.
like see often face, with activities and do anything.
like see often face, with activities and do anything.
>>I would often like to see the person, doing a lot of activities together.
I think doing interest activity make good relationship.
I think doing interest activity make good relationship.
>>I like doing interesting things together makes a good relationship.
who is similar mind? mental? someone like me.
who is similar mind? mental? someone like me.
>>A person who thinks the same way as me.
The more physically activities more close and sometimes having a meal together
The more physically activities more close and sometimes having a meal together
>>Doing physical activities would make us become closer like going out for a meal.
It is good to know each other.
It is good to know each other.
>>correct
How about you?
How about you?
>>correct
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