homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) homework do not like we
We do not like homework.
2) breakfast does not make Doris
Doris does not make breakfast.
3) not you swimming are
You are not swimming.
4) live in a flat the Millers do not
Millers do not live in a flat.
5) does not play handball she at school
She does not play handball at school.
Yesterday, my friend Hyo-Jung suggested we hold a house concert by messenger.
She is a mucic teacher in middle school. She is on maternity leave now.
She seems to miss a music.
I have a fluet, of course I can play it so I agreed her opinion.
Although we will invite 4 to 5 friends, it will be very fun.
Actually, that will be my debut.
Suddenly we are very excited.
I said I will prepare my stage costume.
She also said she will be a chairman for our house concert.
Some friends are helped to us.
One of them is not able to play any instruments.
So she should be in charge of applaud.
We will talk about its details tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]!
Thank you so much for doing a great job on your homework!!
Keep up the good work!!
By the way good luck on your concert Miss. [Name]!
Talk to you again later my dear
xoxoTEacher Cam^^
1) homework do not like we We do not like homework.
>>correct2) breakfast does not make Doris Doris does not make breakfast.
>>correct3) not you swimming are You are not swimming.>>correct4) live in a flat the Millers do not Millers do not live in a flat.
>>correct5) does not play handball she at school She does not play handball at school.>>correctYesterday, my friend Hyo-Jung suggested we hold a house concert by messenger.>>correct
She is a mucic teacher in middle school. She is on maternity leave now.>>correct
She seems to miss a music.>>She seems to miss music.
I have a fluet, of course I can play it so I agreed her opinion.>>I have a flute and I can play that instrument so I agreed to her opinion.
Although we will invite 4 to 5 friends, it will be very fun.>>correct
Actually, that will be my debut.>>correct
Suddenly we are very excited.>>correct
>>Sudeenly I feel very excited.
I said I will prepare my stage costume.>>correct
She also said she will be a chairman for our house concert.>>correct
Some friends are helped to us.>>Some of our friends helped us.
One of them is not able to play any instruments.>>correct
So she should be in charge of applaud. >>She should be in chargeof the audience.
We will talk about its details tomorrow.
>>correct
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