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I usually wear the comfortable running shoes. When I was 20, I used to wear sneakers which are narrow-toed. My foot size is small but I have a wide ball of the foot. Sneakers are really pretty and my type but I felt uncomfortable when I wore them for a long time. And during winter, I usually wear ugg boots and slippers which I bought in Australia.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I usually wear the canvas sneakers.
_T. SHAY^^
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I usually wear the comfortable running shoes.
Thank you for sharing.
I usually wear the canvas sneakers.
_T. SHAY^^
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I usually wear the comfortable running shoes.
>>Correct
OR: I usually wear sneakers.
When I was 20, I used to wear sneakers which are narrow-toed.
OR: I usually wear sneakers.
When I was 20, I used to wear sneakers which are narrow-toed.
>>Correct
OR: When I was 20, I used to wear narrow-toed sneakers.
My foot size is small but I have a wide ball of the foot.
OR: When I was 20, I used to wear narrow-toed sneakers.
My foot size is small but I have a wide ball of the foot.
>>My foot is small, but I have a wide forefoot.
OR: I have small feet, but the ball of my foot is wide.
OR: I have small feet, but the ball of my foot is wide.
Sneakers are really pretty and my type, but I felt uncomfortable when I wore them for a long time.
>>Sneakers are really pretty and my type, but they feel uncomfortable when I wear them for a long time.
And during winter, I usually wear ugg boots and slippers which I bought in Australia.
>>Correct
OR: In the colder seasons, I mostly wear Ugg boots and slippers I purchased in Australia.
OR: In the colder seasons, I mostly wear Ugg boots and slippers I purchased in Australia.
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