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I usually buy a new one but I have an experience to buy clothes from thrift shop. It is like a vintage clothing store where it sells second-handed product from famous brand. So I could buy it 1/3 price of new one. Actually, I haven\'t visited the real thrift shop. I want to look around those kind of stores if I found them by chance.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Actually, there are many thrift shops here in the Philippines.
Sometimes you can really find good clothes.
_T. SHAY^^
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I usually buy a new one but I have an experience to buy clothes from thrift shop.
Thank you for sharing.
Actually, there are many thrift shops here in the Philippines.
Sometimes you can really find good clothes.
_T. SHAY^^
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I usually buy a new one but I have an experience to buy clothes from thrift shop.
>>I usually buy new ones, but I have an experience buying clothes from a thrift shop.
It is like a vintage clothing store where it sells second-handed product from famous brand.
It is like a vintage clothing store where it sells second-handed product from famous brand.
>>It is like a vintage clothing store that sells secondhand products from famous brands.
So I could buy it 1/3 price of new one.
>>So I could buy it for one-third the price of a new one.
Actually, I haven\'t visited the real thrift shop.
Actually, I haven\'t visited the real thrift shop.
>>Actually, I haven\'t visited a real thrift shop.
I want to look around those kind of stores if I found them by chance.
>>I want to look around those kinds of stores if I find them by chance.
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