homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening Jeny!
wow! It\'s such a difficult of topic homework.
I think getting older is grow up to myself? develropment? and freedom
I felt not good when i getting older before twenties
Because i was just counted age. so sad
I don\'t know about me exactly
but not now, i can see different view.
i can learn to a lot of things, be positive way
강사 첨삭
Great job! Jon!!
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Have a splendid day!!!Good evening Jeny!
>>correct
wow! It\'s such a difficult of topic homework.
wow! It\'s such a difficult of topic homework.
>>wow! It\'s such a difficult topic for homework.
I think getting older is grow up to myself? develropment? and freedom
I think getting older is grow up to myself? develropment? and freedom
>>I think getting older makes me mature, develop myself and enjoy my freedom.
I felt not good when i getting older before twenties
I felt not good when i getting older before twenties
>>I felt bad getting older in my twenties.
Because i was just counted age. so sad
Because i was just counted age. so sad
>>Because I was counting my age.
I don\'t know about me exactly
I don\'t know about me exactly
>>I exactly don\'t know,
but not now, i can see different view.
but not now, i can see different view.
>>but now I have a different view.
i can learn to a lot of things, be positive way
i can learn to a lot of things, be positive way
>>I learned a lot of things, one of which is to be positive.
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