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2025-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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I think it\'s the ideal time to get married after 2 years from getting a job. We need to earn some money before marriage because we should pay a lot of money for wedding cermony or living place. So I think male\'s average age of getting married is older than female\'s because of the military. I think I also can get married late because I\'ll enter the graduate school. So I delayed starting to earn money and even I don\'t have a boyfriend now. Maybe it\'s around 32,,?

강사 첨삭

Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I think early 30s is good.
_T. SHAY^^
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I think it\'s the ideal time to get married after 2 years from getting a job.

>>I think the ideal time to get married is two years after starting a job.
We need to earn some money before marriage because we should pay a lot of money for wedding cermony or living place.

>>We need to earn some money before getting married because we should pay a lot of money for the wedding ceremony and a place to live.
So I think male\'s average age of getting married is older than female\'s because of the military.

>>I think the average age at which men get married is higher than that of women because of military service.

I think I also can get married late because I\'ll enter the graduate school.

>>I think I might get married late too because I\'m going to graduate school.

So I delayed starting to earn money and even I don\'t have a boyfriend now.

>>I delayed starting to earn money, and I don\'t have a boyfriend right now.

Maybe it\'s around 32,,?

>>Maybe it\'s around 32.
OR: Maybe the average age is in the early 30s.

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