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I have different interests with each friends in common. Because we became close in different reasons. One group of my friends and I have a similar YouTube algorithm, so we can share funny things while we talk. Another group can share our high-school life or middle school life. It\'s a past memories but it\'s always funny whenever we talk about that.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Oh, yes! That\'s true.
It\'s good that you share something in common in every circle of friends you have.
_T. SHAY^^
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I have different interests with each friends in common. Because we became close in different reasons.
Thank you for sharing.
Oh, yes! That\'s true.
It\'s good that you share something in common in every circle of friends you have.
_T. SHAY^^
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I have different interests with each friends in common. Because we became close in different reasons.
>>I have different common interest with each friend because we became close for different reasons.
One group of my friends and I have a similar YouTube algorithm, so we can share funny things while we talk.
>>Correct
OR: One group of friends and I share similar YouTube algorithm, so we can talk about those things.
OR: One group of friends and I share similar YouTube algorithm, so we can talk about those things.
Another group can share our high-school life or middle school life.
>>With my other circle of friends, we can share about our high school life and middle school life.
It\'s a past memories but it\'s always funny whenever we talk about that.
>>Those are past memories, but it\'s always fun whenever we talk about those.
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