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Each of people does very different action when they are nervous. I often see nervous people when they need to do presentation. Their voices vibrate and they are stiff. And I usually read the script very fast when I\'m nervous. Shifty eyes is another action when I\'m nervous. I look the floor and can\'t see others\' eyes. And I make a fake smile.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
You\'re right we all act differently.
In my case, my knees usually get wobbly, and I blush.
_T. SHAY^^
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Each of people does very different action when they are nervous.
Thank you for sharing.
You\'re right we all act differently.
In my case, my knees usually get wobbly, and I blush.
_T. SHAY^^
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Each of people does very different action when they are nervous.
>>Each person does a different action when they are nervous.
OR: Each person reacts differently when they are nervous.
I often see nervous people when they need to do presentation.
>>I often see people get nervous when they need to give a presentation.
I often see nervous people when they need to do presentation.
>>I often see people get nervous when they need to give a presentation.
Their voices vibrate and they are stiff.
>>Their voices shake and they appear stiff.
And I usually read the script very fast when I\'m nervous.
>>Correct
OR: I tend to speak fast when I\'m nervous.
Shifty eyes is another action when I\'m nervous.
>>I tend to have shifty eyes when I\'m nervous.
I look the floor and can\'t see others\' eyes.
>>Their voices shake and they appear stiff.
And I usually read the script very fast when I\'m nervous.
>>Correct
OR: I tend to speak fast when I\'m nervous.
Shifty eyes is another action when I\'m nervous.
>>I tend to have shifty eyes when I\'m nervous.
I look the floor and can\'t see others\' eyes.
>>I look at the floor and I can\'t look at other people in the eye.
And I make a fake smile.
>> And I wear a fake smile.
And I make a fake smile.
>> And I wear a fake smile.
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